In the 1950s Torreya taxifolia a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida started to die out No one is sure exactly what caused the decline but chances are good that if nothing is done Torreya will soon become extinct Experts are co

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In the 1950s Torreya taxifolia, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya will soon become extinct. Experts are considering three ways to address the decline of Torreya.

The article states that the three methods to survive and conservation of Torreya Taxifolia purposed by scientist and provide three reason for support. however the professor explains that; unfortunately, none of the reasons is satisfactory solution for preventing this decline and the Torreya will soon be extinct; and refutes each of author's reasons.

First, the reading states that one of the option is to reestablish torreya in the same microclimate whereby it thrived and survived durin thousands of years. The professor refutes this point by stating that global effect and other climate change would seriously affect this microclimate and animal habitat thereof. being a wet land in same microclimate notwithstanding, it had been drained last year.

Second, the article claims that other option changing entire location to adjunct or far from its real distance where the temperature are cooler than microclimate. the professor contends that it might have been unlikely to reach a right conclusion. one experience in past has shown a failure in relocating a tree known as Blacklucas; by relocating this tree, other species were extinct inasmuch as pressure of these trees.

Third, the reading avers that the planting Torreya taxifolia in the laboratories and research centers, this can then be used to ensure the continue conservation of these species. The professor refutes this point by declaring that the research center have not enough capacity to reestablish such forest-size trees; In order to prevent disease and other event, the trees should be more divers genetically in long terms.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: however,
...t and provide three reason for support. however the professor explains that; unfortunat...
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Suggestion: Being
...icroclimate and animal habitat thereof. being a wet land in same microclimate notwith...
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Suggestion: The
...mperature are cooler than microclimate. the professor contends that it might have b...
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Suggestion: One
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...enters, this can then be used to ensure the continue conservation of these species. The prof...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.432 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84122790357 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.26691767 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12733907418 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494128976674 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450720120684 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777740101548 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041059724105 0.0443174109184 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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