6. Which one of the following do you prefer to do in order to
find a successful job?
• Asking the opinions of others (real-life and online
friends)
• Sending letters to the company
• Looking for information on the internet or
advertisements in the newspaper
Nowadays, in order to survive the current economic climate, all people are supposed to work from dawn to dask, so they have to spend a significant part of their life at workplaces. In order to stay productive, people prefer to find a successful job which does not make them disappointed. There are three avenues to find a successful job: asking others for their opinions, sending letters to the company, and searching on the internet and other media. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that asking others is the best course of action among those given options. To support this, there are several reasons, two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that asking the opinions of our friends who we are more likely to have some same interest can provide us with a lot their first-hand experinces, and according to socialogist, the best way to get to know about a certain subjet is gaining first-hand information. Those of our friend both real and online friemds who have some experinces in workplces can share their idea with us and this information can be more practical for us that those are provided on interent and newspapers, because we are more confident about their accuracy. For example, a couple of years ago, I was seeking for a successful job, I dicussed with one of my friends whose fields of interesrt were the same of me, and she also was working a company for 7 years. I use her experiences and advices in my job finding procedure and those was very helpful for me and broaden my horizon in my field.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should bbe taken into account is that sending letters to company may face some difficulty and also may end up costing a lot in the case of a company in other town. In addition they are vulnerable to be lost. Moreover, reporters of newspapers and internet need to increase their viewers in oder to stay in business and increase their income, as a result they may add some fabricated, attractive information about jobs in the regard of financial aspects. As a result, the information provided for job seekers in newspapers and internet may not be accurate, and people may end up choosing the a bad job using those information. It is obvious that when people ask their friends for their idea, they are out of any lost or lies.
In short, all the aforementioned reason s lead us to the conclusion that, our friends opinion can be considered as a more practical approach when we are seeking a successful job. The fact that have known each other can be more accurate in recognizing situations, coupled with some disadvatages of other options which are of their nature, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...the case of a company in other town. In addition they are vulnerable to be lost. Moreove...
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Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...ccurate, and people may end up choosing the a bad job using those information. It is ...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...may end up choosing the a bad job using those information. It is obvious that when people ask the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 10.4613686534 268% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 22.412803532 259% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 30.3222958057 218% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1373.03311258 166% => OK
No of words: 486.0 270.72406181 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69547325103 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69704976986 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 145.348785872 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 419.366225166 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0587922748 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.625 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267581766372 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914056737309 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662312086103 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163711587986 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512404043296 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.3589403974 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 63.6247240618 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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