about finding fossil
The reading and lecture are both about whether the T-rex fossil, which scientists found with the maintenance of tissue, is a real one or not. The text presents three explanations to posit why this maintenance bone tissue includes the blood cell and collagen. The professor, on the other hand, refutes all of those explanations.
To begin with, the author of the reading claims that they are breaking a leg of dinosaur deliberately and see inside the bone the small channels and branches that are being the location of vessels. Nevertheless, the professor opposes this claim by mentioning that this soft substance inside the bone is not blood, and it is something else. Also, she states that after the animal dies, an empty place like the location of the blood vessel might fill with the moister substance, and bacteria colony makes the liquid, so this is not blood.
Secondly, the article posits that a scientist finds a red cell sphere during the investigation. Moreover, they see some of sphere are darker than others and maybe have some iron. The professor maintains on opposites the opinion that this iron sphere does not find in other primitive animals, and this argument is weird, and she says that perhaps this dark color associated with a reddish mineral that producing on the fossils.
Third, the reading states that the scientist finds collagen in the bone of fossils. The professor, however, casts doubt on this claim by stating that collagen can exist just 1000 years, but this fossil lives 170 million years ago, so the collagen does not last. Besides, she says that maybe this collagen comes from the skin of the researcher carry t-rex dinosaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45757626991 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9636580384 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06452816374 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119969086707 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434746627318 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595073978413 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707713316754 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430883052628 0.0443174109184 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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