The article discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks, instead of starting a new business, however, one can buy a franchise. A franchise is a license issued by a large, usually well-known sompany to a small business owner and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that the reasons mentioned in the passage are not exaclty true and opposes each of the authors reasons.
First, the reading passage discusses that a najor problem for first-time business owners is finding reliable suppliers of the goods and services they need. In contrast, the professor provides information that force owners to buy goods and services from franchise is overpriced. He states that goods and services at the markets are cheaper. Clearly a disparity exists between the article and the evidence exhibited by the professor.
Second, the article pushes forth the idea that another advantage of a franchise is that it can save a new business a lot of money on advertising. However, the classroom discussion contends that by for agree new business we have to pay 6 percent at sale. According to the professor, the company advertising for us but doesnt advertise our business and it has very little benefit. Consequently, we can argue that indeed the claim made im reading is unsubstantiated.
Finally, the reading posits that a franchise offers more security than starting an independent business. The professor refutes this point by explaining that offers more security is risky. He mentioned that independent have twice chance as franchise.
The article discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks, instead of starting a new business, however, one can buy a franchise. A franchise is a license issued by a large, usually well-known Company to a small business owner and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that the reasons mentioned in the passage are not exactly true and opposes each of the authors reasons.
First, the reading passage discusses that a major problem for first-time business owners is finding reliable suppliers of the goods and services they need. In contrast, the professor provides information that force owners to buy goods and services from franchise is overpriced. He states that goods and services at the markets are cheaper. Clearly a disparity exists between the article and the evidence exhibited by the professor.
Second, the article pushes forth the idea that another advantage of a franchise is that it can save a new business a lot of money on advertising. However, the classroom discussion contends that by for agree new business we have to pay 6 percent at sale. According to the professor, the company advertising for us but doesn't advertise our business and it has very little benefit. Consequently, we can argue that indeed the claim made im reading is unsubstantiated.
Finally, the reading posits that a franchise offers more security than starting an independent business. The professor refutes this point by explaining that offers more security is risky. He mentioned that independent have twice chance as franchise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sor, the company advertising for us but doesnt advertise our business and it has very ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, second, so, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21755725191 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87739684813 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2777769329 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408212905791 0.272083759551 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114411875111 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208763880245 0.0662205650399 315% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231345963471 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.246937953438 0.0443174109184 557% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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