Many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks, instead of starting a new business, however, one can buy a franchise. A franchise is a license issued by a large, usually well-known, company to a small business owner. Under the license, the owner acquires the right to use the company's brand name and agrees to sell its products. In return, the franchising company receives a percentage of sales.
Both the reading passage and the lecture arguess the franchise, permison to use the name of large and well-known company and sell its products. With this in mind, the author states that franchise has several advantages for people who want to start up a new business. On the other hand, the professor contradicts all three episodes of arguments mentioned in the passage, believing the results of some study show in opposit of the autor claims.
First of all, the writer points out that a franchise eliminates some of the problems that people will be faced when decide to start their own independent business, for instance, trouble in finding reliabe suppliers of goods and services. Conversely, the lecturer makes it clear that some franchises make it force to buy some specific goods and services which are expensive, while there are some cheaper goods in the markets.
Second, the reading selection holds the view that an benefit of franchise is elimination of advertisement fee because you will become a part of a well-known and popular brand. However, the lecture explains that people how buy a franchise should pay 6 percent of the total of their income to the company. Moreover, the company doesn't advertise your business and just advertise the brand. So, the individuals do not take advantage of compony advertisment.
Finally, the author mentions that franchise is more secure that opening up your own nonfranchise business. On the other hand, the speaker contradicts this idea and explains that the result of study shows that the independent businesses are two times successful than franchise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow in opposit of the autor claims. First of all, the writer points out that...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... points out that a franchise eliminates some of the problems that people will be faced when...
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Line 13, column 314, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...lear that some franchises make it force to buy some specific goods and services which ...
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...some cheaper goods in the markets. Second, the reading selection holds the ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e reading selection holds the view that an benefit of franchise is elimination of ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...e to the company. Moreover, the company doesnt advertise your business and just advert...
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...advantage of compony advertisment. Finally, the author mentions that franch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26335877863 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7212883941 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7727056483 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225156940161 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764406586967 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465127620662 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125145491309 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136427101136 0.0443174109184 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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