TPO29-integrated
The reading passage and the listening part both discuss the migration hypothesis of edmontosaurus to south in order to survive harsh winter. With this in mind, the author states that there are several reasons to support this hypothesis. The professor, on the other hand, refutes all tree episodes of arguments mentiond in the reading, beliveing that non of them are convincing.
First, from the edmontosaurus' diet issue, the writer explains that edmontosaurus fed on plants and due to the harsh winter in north slope, edmontosaurus would have found any plants to eat. Therefor, they must have migrate to temperate zones in order to find food. Conversely, the lecturer makes it clear that climate in north slope was much warmer that today. Besides, the warm and extended day-time in other seasons makd a suitable condition to grow plenty of plants and so, there was pelenty of dead plants for edmontosaurus to eat in winter.
Second, the auther states that evedince of edmontosaurus skeletons suggests that those animals lived in herd. due to the fact that many present-day animals which migrate, live in herd so it can be interpreted that edmontosaurus migrated to find food. However, the speaker says that the fact that edmontosaurus live in herd have nothing to do with weather they were migratory animals or not. she continues that living in herd can have othere reasons for instance surviving from predators. Plus, there are many modern-day animals which live in herd but don't migrate.
Finally, while the reading put furth the idea that edmontosaurus could run very fast and were able to migrate longe distances, the professor contradicts this idea. she mentions that adult edmontosaurus could run fast but what a bout those were not adult? adult edmontosaurus couldn't leave their childeren alone and migrate by rest of the herd so, all the herd had to stay in the north slope in winter and stay together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'migrated'.
Suggestion: migrated
...plants to eat. Therefor, they must have migrate to temperate zones in order to find foo...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...gests that those animals lived in herd. due to the fact that many present-day anima...
^^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...her they were migratory animals or not. she continues that living in herd can have ...
^^^
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dern-day animals which live in herd but dont migrate. Finally, while the rea...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which live in herd but dont migrate. Finally, while the reading put furth the...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...s, the professor contradicts this idea. she mentions that adult edmontosaurus could...
^^^
Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adult
...t but what a bout those were not adult? adult edmontosaurus couldnt leave their child...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ose were not adult? adult edmontosaurus couldnt leave their childeren alone and migrate...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, finally, first, however, second, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06940063091 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69002505783 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8676913661 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343781890609 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11605535044 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456592115895 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191594701077 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438397649779 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.