Avocados
The author of the topic tries to prove that avocados are very beneficial fruits. He has three arguments in support of this opinion. But the lecturer challenges all of them.
First, the author writes, avocados can be used for lowering blood pressure because of plenty of vitamins and minerals inside. But the lecturer says that avocados also have a lot of fats. Hence, they don't seem healthy for a human, leading to the weight increase and, moreover, high blood pressure, the opposite thing relative to what the author wanted to prove.
Secondly, the author states that avocados are useful for pregnant women. The lecturer strongly opposes this statement because of several reasons. The first one is that avocados have the bad impact to the future milk production. Moreover, he adds, consumption of avocados also leads to bad consequences for a fetus, and thus should be avoided.
Finally, the lecturer casts doubt to the argument that avocados are cheap and can even successfully change meat for vegans. Avocados, according his words, are not so cheap. He concludes that they are very expensive comparing with other popular fruits, such as bananas. He also says that a lot of water is used to grow avocados, so it becomes very damaging for the environment to produce it, even in a comparision with meat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...os also have a lot of fats. Hence, they dont seem healthy for a human, leading to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99543378995 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51772557224 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1343186725 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287167149442 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114528241817 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117596069072 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192714209837 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826814600066 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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