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Because of its remote location, only a few species of plants and animals thrived on Easter Island, and the water surrounding it contained very few fish. Nevertheless, beginning with extremely limited resources on an isolated island, the native people achieved a very advanced culture, as evidenced by the gigantic monolithic human figures that line the coasts, as well as by other artifacts. The complete collapse of this civilization is still a mystery, but several theories have been put forward.

In east Island, only a few species of plants and animals thrived,
and the water surrounding it contained very few fish. The
native people achieved a very advanced culture, as evidenced
by gigantic monolithic human figure that line the coasts, is still
a mystery, the passage interview few theories and the culture
reject this theories.
First, the passages tell that that the people there cut all the
forest to clear the land, so the trees could regenerate quickly
enough to sustain the environment. By other hand the lecture
talk about that the land is no good for the trees, so this reason
they don’t grow up again.
Second, the writers say that was a war, and because the war all
the forest heart and many people died, however the speaker
say that the war exist in 1680, and we see the change in the
number of the people almost 100 year later, so it is impossible.
In over all, the speaker on the lecture, think that this civilization
is still mystery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ew few theories and the culture reject this theories. First, the passages tell tha...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...his theories. First, the passages tell that that the people there cut all the forest to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 1373.03311258 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 270.72406181 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33802603052 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 419.366225166 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5210106541 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.09492273731 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201804867797 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110393781268 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176536423343 0.0662205650399 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647511879149 0.162205337803 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115061756801 0.0443174109184 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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