Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.”
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
many people think that all the university students sould be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. I agree with this statement. we must to know our history before we move on to the future. Because without past we do not have a future
First, we must to know the history of our country, all the wars, all the leaders. if we do not know this history we do not know why we have our country. For example, if in Israel students do not learn historic, they do not about independence war of our country. this war was very important, and many soldiers died on this war.
Second, we must to know the historic of all the important people from the past, like Einstain or Tomas Edison. this people and many like theme create all the things we use today, moreover without them we do not have somethings like electrcity, cars and more and more. For example, <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Einstain </span>create many new theories to the world, so we use on this theories until this days, so we must to learn about him and his theories for move on for the future.
Third, we need to look about the past and learn from the mistake that people done. many people all over the world try things, some of them successful, but some of them fail. this our opportunity to learn from their fail and do it better in the future, or we learn and will try never return on their mistakes. For example, someone try to build chair with two legs, but when he sat he fall down, now we learn that is no work with two legs.
To conclusion, all our life build about our past. all our future will be better if we learn from people before us. this why in my opinion all the students should be required take history courses no matter what their field os study is.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41158536585 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56846864046 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44512195122 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9054117033 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179072646547 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798648901729 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118065921816 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141117717597 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113114909914 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.