Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States, but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers. Because of this limitation, 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of California, on the West Coast. It must be shipped 4:000 kilometers across the entire country to reach the populous East Coast
The author discusses the possible advantages of harvesting the broccoli on the East coast. The lecturer, however, refutes the assets mentioned in the passage, and refutes them by sepcific explanations.
First, the reading states that the new type of broccoli would be beneficial by reducing the expense of transformation from the regions where broccoli is grown to the East coast. The professor, on the other hands, rejects this idea, and states that it would not be beneficial. She states that, it is acceptable that the transformation costs would be cut and, and this broccoli may survive hot summers, but they may not cause the total price for the consumers be reduced. In fact, the farmers from the East cost may harvest low amounts of broccoli, so it may increase the final price for customers.
Second, the author states that the broccoli of the East coast may be more delicious for local people. The professor, conversely, believes that this notion would not be practical, too. She asserts that the funding for new broccoli comes from sources that people do not have a good experience about them. Indeed, in the past, these companies were responsible for some products with genetic modifications, and were completely unsuccesful. Thus, this bad background may bring about an offensive reaction from people to the new product, and they may decline it.
Finally, the passage states that the vegetables are easier and healthier to be consumed when they are fresh. The lecturer, in contrast, states that there is no doubt that it is prefered for the vegetables to be eaten right after production, but people in the East coast are already provided with a variety of different plants and vegetables. Thus, it is more benefical to teach them use those vegetables rather than a kind of brocolli which is not native to their local.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be beneficial by reducing the expense of transformation from the regions where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, in contrast, in fact, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01633986928 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67934199202 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1941644371 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06452816374 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219713752086 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815408369136 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631881482528 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125156922851 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648999405732 0.0443174109184 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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