The lecturer disputes the author's suggested theory that fossils of bees did not exit 200 millions years ago. He provides several reasons to cast doubt about the author's claims
First, according to the text no fossils were discovered 200 Millions years ago because The earliest discovered are dated 100 millions years ago in Arizona. The speaker find this idea debatable. He asserts that indeed, they may have existed 200 years ago. However, because there were no tree raisins available to preserve the nest, they might have been destroyed with time.
The lecturer contradicts the fallacy of the passage that since flowering plants have not existed at that period of time, it is unlikely that bees nest existed either because bees feed on flowering plants. The lecturer contends that, theoretically speaking, bees may have existed at that time because there are fossil of pine and fern discovered. The lecturer contends that such kind of trees have evolved later in time to flowering plants.
Finally, the author argues that the structure of nest discovered lack some important details like caps. Again the lecturer refutes these claims by stating that an analyses of fossils showed that the material which the nest used to protect against water was lacking this can significantly change the structure of the nest in a way that it appears not real.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...lions years ago in Arizona. The speaker find this idea debatable. He asserts that in...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...owering plants have not existed at that period of time, it is unlikely that bees nest existed ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fossils'?
Suggestion: fossils
... existed at that time because there are fossil of pine and fern discovered. The lectu...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause there are fossil of pine and fern discovered. The lecturer contends that s...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re fossil of pine and fern discovered. The lecturer contends that such kind of tre...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an analysis' or simply 'analyses'?
Suggestion: an analysis; analyses
...er refutes these claims by stating that an analyses of fossils showed that the material whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11261261261 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38070201125 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3876101372 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3111520216 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124356948864 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102372746263 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177692935113 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774925974106 0.0443174109184 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.