Dinosaurs as Endotherm Animals
The professor discusses the reasons why dinosaurs are not endotherms. The information she presents is in direct contrast to facts outlined in the reading.
First, the lecturer mentions that dinosaurs cannot maintain temperature well. In fact, she talks that the temperature at that time was much higher than today’s temperature. In addition, by the time the weather was cold, dinosaurs migrated to another warmer area, or even slept until the temperature was getting warmer. On the other hand, according to the reading, dinosaurs are assumed to be endotherms with the evidence of their fossils found in polar regions and only animals that keep their body temperature warm can survive during cold weather.
Second, based on the reading passage, dinosaurs are endotherms because dinosaurs have the legs underneath their bodies and those legs are believed to be used for running. However, the speaker disputes that those legs, in fact, are used by dinosaurs in order to support their body weight. What’s more, dinosaurs don’t have much energy for running.
Last but not least, the reading includes information about Haversian canals. The presence of these canals are assumed to prove that dinosaurs can growth quickly in which there is a correlation between rapid growth and the characteristic of endothermy. On the other hand, the lecturers argue that besides Haversian carnals, dinosaurs also have another bone structure indicating that dinosaurs also stop growing in some period of time. Consequently, the growth of dinosaurs are not as quick as mentioned by the reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hat dinosaurs also stop growing in some period of time. Consequently, the growth of dinosaurs ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270547945205 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.167808219178 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650684931507 0.0723426182421 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479452054795 0.0435111971325 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205479452055 0.0277247811725 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123287671233 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0547945205479 0.0370669169778 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74737543945 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239726027397 0.0208969081088 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106164383562 0.128158765124 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102739726027 0.0158828679856 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.0114777025283 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1590.0 1645.83664459 97% => OK
No of words: 249.0 271.125827815 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38554216867 6.08160592843 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04852973271 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397590361446 0.374372842146 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341365461847 0.287516216867 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244979919679 0.187439937562 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160642570281 0.113142543107 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74737543945 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.539623497131 106% => OK
Word variations: 56.918019714 53.8517498576 106% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1538461538 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8594768999 49.3711431718 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 132.220823453 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.878197800319 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 53.2903923386 50.5018328374 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.89855072464 1.90840788429 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140037600327 0.549887131256 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1318064669 0.142949733639 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995638106183 0.0787303798458 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608290601968 0.631733273073 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1201772069 0.139662658121 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684740382557 0.266732575781 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559837706388 0.103435571967 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333619034455 0.414875509568 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0350750856535 0.0530846634433 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928023517028 0.40443939384 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342318865272 0.0528353158467 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.49668874172 200% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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