Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology has revolutionised the process of learning in past few decades.This change is well experienced by the students who use various sources of learning, like computers, internet, television and books, to gain knowledge. I totally believe that, with the advent of technology of World Wide Web, these days, students are learning more and learning at a faster rate. I feel this way for the following reasons.
First of all, internet has made the information easily available to the curious readers. It has tremendously improved the quality of student’s research providing the updated literature and knowledge on a single click of the key. For example, in the past, when my uncle was doing a thesis for his masters, he highly relied on the printed books and journals which provided the information before the printing year. It took him long time to search for the related material in the book which was insufficient. Moreover, the unavailability of the details and the latest updates related to the topic prevented him from writing an effective research paper. Conversely, couple of years back from today, when I was working on my dissertation, I had access to loads of original research papers to review on the internet in seconds when I started the search. Along with the books, I got minute details related to the topic from official websites to learn about the new assessment tools to be used in my research. Consequently, my research paper was very thorough and detailed which fetched me good grades. Admittedly, internet played a crucial role to achieve this.
Moreover, cyber technology has given access to more learning in less time with the commencement of online distance learning courses. In the past, students could earn one degree at a time where they needed to attend the college physically. As a result, this type of education took lot of time, money and energy. These days, the scenario has changed completely. For example, couple of months back, I sought for an online course by the Duke university, USA. Without the need to attend the university in the USA,I was able to learn PT practices in the US through the online course earning credentials while taking classes to prepare for the PT licence exam in my home town in India. This significantly reduced the time required to reach my aim of being a licenced PT in USA. Have I not had this opportunity of pursuing education online, I would have taken a very long time than expected to fulfil my dream.
In conclusion, I agree that internet technology has totally enhanced the experience of learning like never before by providing greater information in no time. This is because it has hose the quality of educational research and because the access to online courses has aid in enhancing qualification faster.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...process of learning in past few decades.This change is well experienced by the stude...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...need to attend the university in the USA,I was able to learn PT practices in the U...
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Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...lly enhanced the experience of learning like never before by providing greater infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 30.3222958057 251% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1373.03311258 170% => OK
No of words: 466.0 270.72406181 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01502145923 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82599042577 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 145.348785872 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542918454936 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 419.366225166 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2203149264 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.227272727 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145707981297 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414285211416 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642167972781 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101842764893 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589693963452 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 63.6247240618 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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