Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Everybody has their own way of living a fulfilled life. Some people feel content with what they have and don’t wish for anything more in life. However, considering today’s scenario, I contend that there are more people these days who are never satisfied. Moreover they always want to achieve something more in life. I feel this way due to the following reasons.
To begin with, today everyone's desire to have more in life gives them a sense of progress. Gone are the days when the public just used to earn for their living and was pacified with what they had. My brother-in-law demonstrates a good example for this. He had an Indian passport. He pursued his medical education in UK and had a successful career as a renowned cardiac surgeon. Eventually earning a British passport, he move to india followed by migrating to Dubai to explore his efficiency in different country’s surgical unit set up. Apparently, he is still challenging his abilities by seeking PhD is pediatric cardiac surgery. He defines this strive to be his sense of progress. On the other hand, my father in law who is a famous physician in india dedicated his life to serve the low socioeconomic population in his rural home town. He was comfortable with his extent of practice and never tried to explore his personal career opportunities.
In addition to this, a wish to have something more in life gives a sense of happiness. Having a same lifestyle for long time could be a stereotype and monotonous. Working towards achieving more can make life exciting and meaningful. Take me for example. Couple of yrs back I had a perfect life of luxury. I am well-educated, have sound bank balance, huge legacy, happy family, but I still was not happy from inside. Failure to have any aim in life was pulling me towards boredom and depression. On my husband’s suggestion, I commenced to seek higher education in my profession. undoubtedly, now I enjoy studying and feel refreshed to spend quality time with family after that. The desire to strive for more gives me hope and excitement in live.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people these days are not satisfied with what they have and want something more in life. This is because working for something more gives them a feeling of progress and happiness and make their life more meaningful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8625 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85179658286 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5325 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.565180669 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.037037037 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8148148148 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226614422081 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658143256714 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945862841498 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183492396854 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957060299255 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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