Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
As human we need an abundant amount of things to survive and we get these objects. Once obtained then we want other things. I agree with the statement that people are never satisfied with what they have and they always want more. I will explore this in the following essay.
As human we need things to survive and in this modern era of abundancy we want alot of things. Also once people get what they wanted then they want other materials. For example, if a young couple desires to have a baby and they get it, then the next step is to get the child its necessities. In doing so the parents want more things now that they have an offspring. Furthermore they want the best schools, the nicest clothes, computers, and smartphones not only for themselves but for the family.
In the workforce the employees also want more and more stuff. At first its just the job, then its an office, then its a raise, then vacation, etc. desiring things is human nature and as we carry out goals then people create new goals. The idea of not settling to one thing is good it allows society to grow. Even if a person is more spiritual, they want and want things. For example, someone may ask for inner peace, and once that is reached then they want world peace. I remember once when I went to the beach on Earth Day and cleaned up Cabrillo beach with other people. I felt joy from what I had accomplished and I enjoyed the view of the clean sand. In my mind, however I thought about other ways I could help. I wanted to clean other places like parks, forests, and lakes. I just wanted to do more and more to aid the environment.
In conclusion I agree with the statement that people always want more. As we accomplish our goals life continues and different challenges are presented.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gs to survive and we get these objects. Once obtained then we want other things. I ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...a of abundancy we want alot of things. Also once people get what they wanted then t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...hings now that they have an offspring. Furthermore they want the best schools, the nicest ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only for themselves but for the family. In the workforce the employees also want...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...stuff. At first its just the job, then its an office, then its a raise, then vacat...
^^^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... just the job, then its an office, then its a raise, then vacation, etc. desiring ...
^^^
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, then its a raise, then vacation, etc. desiring things is human nature and as w...
^^
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... things is human nature and as we carry out goals then people create new goals. Th...
^^^
Line 13, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and different challenges are presented.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46625766871 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29854508244 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506134969325 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8999350391 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287679341116 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10208486899 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142817686876 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221668927174 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686206790713 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.