Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer
Everybody has their own way of living a fulfilled life. Some people feel content with what they have and don’t wish for anything more in life. However, considering today’s scenario, I contend that there are more people these days who are never satisfied. Moreover, they always want to achieve something more in life. I feel this way due to the following reasons.
To begin with, today, the people’s desire to have more in life is a sense of progress. Gone are the days when the public just used to earn for their living and was pacified with what they had. My brother-in-law demonstrates a good example for this. He had an Indian passport. He perused his medical education in UK and had a successful career as an exemplified renowned cardiac surgeon. Eventually earning a British passport, he moved to India followed by migrating to Dubai to explore his efficiency in different country’s surgical unit set up. Apparently, he is still challenging his abilities by seeking PhD is pediatric cardiac surgery. He defines this strive to be his sense of progress. On the other hand, my father-in-law who was a famous physician in India dedicated his life to serve the low socioeconomic population in his rural home town. He was comfortable with his extent of practice and never tried to explore his personal career opportunities which dictates that feel of satisfaction impedes the spur of advancement in life.
In addition to this, a wish to have something more in life gives a sense of happiness, whereas, having a same lifestyle for long time could be a stereotype and monotonous. Working towards achieving more can make life exciting and meaningful. Take me for example. Couple of years back I had a perfect life of luxury. I am well-educated, have a sound bank balance, huge legacy, happy family, but I was still not happy from inside. Failure to have any aim in life was pulling me towards boredom and depression. On my husband’s suggestion, I commenced to work for my super speciality and seek licence to practice in US. Undoubtedly, I enjoy studying and feel refreshed to spend quality time with family after that. The desire to strive for more gives me ray of hope and encouragement.
To recapitulate, I am of the opinion that people these days always want something more in life. This is because the wish to have more, gives them a feel of thrive and happiness and make their life more meaningful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for example, i feel, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89104116223 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94159266738 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535108958838 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6443424246 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6923076923 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8846153846 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197458958617 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593848605533 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781246692628 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150611437454 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708490651986 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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