TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi
The writer in the passage states that the evergreen torreya is going extinct and experts want to prevent this from happening. They give three options to preserve the plant species. But the lecturer disagrees with these options and explains her point of view.
In the written statement it say's the torreya will become extinct if steps are not taken to preserve it. The professor finds fault in all the possible forms the evergreen can be saved. The first option given by the reading is to try to grow the plant in the native habitat. The problem with this is the microclimate is affected by the surrounding areas and with the change in climate the land will be affected. this will be bad because it would be a waste of seeds.
The second possibility is to carry some of the seeds from the living organism to another area further north. The person potrays this as a terrible idea and provides the example of a time when something similar was done with a different species called Black locust tree and this species spread at a fast rate in the area and it outcompeted the local trees. The person says this same thing can happen with torreya.
The third example is keeping it in research greenhouses. this possesses a problem because the tree will not be able to withstand disease in the wild. The greenhouse would have to be enormous in order for the possibility of this to work and even with this it might not work.
In conclusion the torreya tree is in serious trouble and the solution offered by the reading is highly discouraged by the speaker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...options and explains her point of view. In the written statement it says the tor...
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... grow the plant in the native habitat. The problem with this is the microclimate i...
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... in climate the land will be affected. this will be bad because it would be a waste...
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... The second possibility is to carry some of the seeds from the living organism to anoth...
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... another area further north. The person potrays this as a terrible idea and pro...
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... person potrays this as a terrible idea and provides the example of a time when ...
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...ea and it outcompeted the local trees. The person says this same thing can happen ...
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...me thing can happen with torreya. The third example is keeping it in research...
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...is keeping it in research greenhouses. this possesses a problem because the tree wi...
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...rreya tree is in serious trouble and the solution offered by the reading is high...
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...and the solution offered by the reading is highly discouraged by the speaker. ...
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... is highly discouraged by the speaker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6847826087 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40388652964 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0755886311 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325251719049 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102538075295 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474785484599 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167966484499 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442941402917 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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