Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Transportation is an important part of our livings. People always need to go from one location to the other one. For example, in the daily life they need to go to their work, stores, and schools and so on. Car is an essential vehicle. Although, some people think that in the near future the amount of cars will be reduced, I'm not convinced by this idea. From my vintage point, the amount of car will be increased because of its past rate is incremental. Also, the progressive societies need the greater amount of transportation vehicles such as car in the future.
To begin with, the amount of cars which are used today, are higher than what they were the past. The statistics show that in the past the people tended to commute short distances. Also, the reports show that in the past each family had maximum one car, since the family had one active member as father who was working out of the house. But now in modern life, families have tendency to work out of the house. For example, the wives have the opportunity to work in the job market. By this way they could make some money and they can afford to buy a car. As a result in modern families, it is more possible that there is more than one car. This incremental amount of car may become persistent in the future and the amount of car will be increased.
Along with the incremental trend of cars, the numbers of companies which will be grown in the upcoming years become higher. The progress in economics and cultures are some important causes. Therefore, small cities will be grown and the locations would be far and the people will prefer to commute the location between their house and work with their car. Because, the human beings are naturally tend to prefer the easier solutions and the public transportation vehicles may seem as time-consuming solution.
To conclude, the incremental rate of cars and expansion of the cities and societies, make in clear that the amount of cars which will be using in the next twenty years are increasing. Therefore, I’m seeing the moment that even each kid has a car in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238663484487 0.261695866417 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.143198090692 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835322195704 0.0723426182421 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0286396181384 0.0435111971325 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0286396181384 0.0277247811725 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136038186158 0.128828473217 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0262529832936 0.0370669169778 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47497122615 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286396181384 0.0208969081088 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.124105011933 0.128158765124 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286396181384 0.0158828679856 180% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143198090692 0.0114777025283 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2099.0 1645.83664459 128% => OK
No of words: 374.0 271.125827815 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61229946524 6.08160592843 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04852973271 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291443850267 0.374372842146 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181818181818 0.287516216867 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136363636364 0.187439937562 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.113142543107 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47497122615 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483957219251 0.539623497131 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2638656366 53.8517498576 95% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0529801325 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8095238095 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5518468813 49.3711431718 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9523809524 132.220823453 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.878197800319 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 35.9913419913 50.5018328374 71% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.90840788429 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269769589781 0.549887131256 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122649340887 0.142949733639 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0894533260355 0.0787303798458 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51230707798 0.631733273073 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162011256303 0.139662658121 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113568197283 0.266732575781 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611486512718 0.103435571967 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.570042210579 0.414875509568 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0288642043018 0.0530846634433 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219398501735 0.40443939384 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353113987168 0.0528353158467 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.26048565121 258% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.1766004415 220% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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