Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of technology, societies have become modern with some different dimensions. This complicated modern life needs its own preparations and skills. Personally, I support the idea that people need to plan and organize their tasks for these endeavors. From my vantage point, the ability to plan for accomplishing the goals is a crucial element in attaining job success and establishing a good family.
Firstly, modern life has some specific attributes, such as high amount of competition and high number of experts in distinctive fields. Therefore, people cannot conduct a better future, unless they know what they want to do in their lives and how to achieve them in complicated environment. In particular, young people need to know their objectives and make plans to achieve them and enrich their skills. One of the most important aspects of modern life is economics. Individuals have to establish good careers which match their abilities to have better work life and better income. Thanks to accurate plans and methods, youths are prone to get decent jobs and receive promotions in their jobs. In other words, they know exactly what their prospects are and can plan to accomplish them. Therefore, it is undeniable that they can achieve their goals in work place.
In addition, when people are completely aware of their goals and plans, they are able to manage their relations and tasks. Therefore, they are prone to establish a good family and take advantages of strong relationships with their family members. Indeed, individuals who have accurate plans and organizations in their lives, can easily find their wives or husbands and enhance better families, since they know when the right time for making their own family is and who the right person to marry is. Thus, they would have peaceful mind and concentrate on their goals and achievements.
To conclude, through planning and organizing their lives, young people would guarantee their brilliant future in different aspects such as their work place and family. Hence, try to make your way to bloom your talents and achieve your goals, you would be more successful even if there are extreme obstacles ahead of you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in particular, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15966386555 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64724407634 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532212885154 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4090862082 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168630875896 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627941488104 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359145891742 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122494095192 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519228783575 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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