Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Faced with the fierce society, young people have to focus on how to make them become competed in their careers. In other words, they seem to have no choice to find their own dreams, because there are more and more pressures on them. To keep the pace with other people, what they should do is to take the advice from society. So, in my opinion, they are suffering a terrible and more intense period than before.
First of all, to be successful is going to become the eventual target for those people, even though they have no idea about the meaning of success. There are thousands of experts who emphasize the importance of being a successful man, and parents also educate their children about purchasing it. As a result of it, lots of extra tasks have assigned by their parents. For example, After coming home, an exhausted child plays music with endless practices, because the study shows that playing musical instruments will contribute to their development of the brain. Evidently, it might benefit the future of children, but it also hurts the relations between children and parents at the same time.
Secondly, with the development of the world, some rules won't be appropriate for the current time. It is obvious that the rules should change over time with the advancement of society. For instance, teachers used to arrange students searching for a lot of books in libraries in order to accomplish a paper. This method is not as efficient as searching for the Internet. No matter what resource people want to find, it is easy to get in a few seconds. Therefore, it is advisable to update the way of finding material of writing paper.
To sum up, the pressure coming from societies makes young people confused about what they need to do. Designing a proper purpose for children's future according to their talent is a vital thing that parents should do. On the other hand, people should clear the obstacles that strict their children's creativity, and focus on their lives instead of other things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8231884058 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44922562337 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4079417945 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837307812085 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284761100468 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349097994273 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559834974266 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314911554111 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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