Do you agree or disagree? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television
It is undoubtedly true that the prevalence of technology has made communication much easier in this contemporary era.I am of the opinion that many people now communicate these days than in the past.I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the body paragraphs.
First and foremost, in the past, people often talked about what they have in common, but these days television has made people have more meaningful conversations because they discuss current issues such as politics,environmental situations and many more.My own experience is an intelligent example of this.During lunch time at my place of work my colleague and I often discussing about the news we watched on television and this has really helped us have a strong bonds because we all address it together and try to speculate on the next news that will be broadcasted.However, in the olden days, people don’t know discuss about burning issues.In Fact their lives has been so restricted such that they are uninformed.
Furthermore. People now have a longer lifespan by refraining from a sedentary lifestyle.In the past, so many people died because they don’t have people to talk to each time they experience boredom.An analysis of death rate published in the Punch newspaper shows that a lot of people due to the fact that they never had people to talk.My grandma is a clear example of this.Ten years ago, i lost her to the colds hands of death.The doctor diagnosis was hypertension,she never had people around to interact with.The people in her age gap are dead so she didn't have anyone around her and this was actually what made her develop hypertension.However, my mum who has been nursing diabetes for some years now is still much healthier because she has her children around and whenever she watches any program on television she discuss it with us and as a result she feels much happier with herself.
In light of the reasons mentioned,I believe that television has helped people have a more meaningful talk in this contemporary era.This is because it help people to talk about current issues, and because it increases longevity by preventing people from staying in a constant position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, i feel, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 22.412803532 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 363.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02479338843 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05814408049 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526170798898 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 90.0 21.2450331126 424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.0635537 49.2860985944 538% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 456.0 110.228320801 414% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 90.75 21.698381199 418% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06452816374 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 4.19205298013 763% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194641075109 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126009592743 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183340043797 0.0662205650399 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125928748858 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182464335463 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.6 13.3589403974 356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.87 53.8541721854 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 11.0289183223 348% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.41 8.42419426049 135% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.7273730684 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.0 10.498013245 362% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 38.0 11.2008830022 339% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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