Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials to do research than to use the internet.
It is very essential for students to use the best resources for their research. In my opinion, I believe that books are far better than websites. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, printed materials are more reliable than websites because they can not be edited by an ordinary person. Online materials are full of junk and this has actually contributed to the failure of many students. My personal experience is a compelling example of this.While i was in my sophomore year, i was assigned a mini project in order to complete the end of the semester.I immediately consulted wikipedia just to ensure that i delivered the best.When i submitted the project to my professor, I was awarded zero.She said all my citations were poor, and this actually cost me to repeat the class all over.However, my close friend actually got an excellent grade because she actually consulted a book published by a renowned personalities.If I had use printed materials, i wouldn’t have repeated the class.For this reason, it is certainly clear to see how online materials cost me an extra year.
Furthermore, books are superior over printed materials because they are more detailed.On the other hand, online articles are superficial and they could also not present an orderly fashion.In fact, one can get contradicting views on the same research which is unlikely to be seen with printed books.My cousins experience is a good illustration of this.Whenever my cousin has assignment he will always use the internet, and he do receive the same score everytime.This actually made him infuriated so he decided to use a textbook for the next assignment and to his surprise he got hundred percent.At the time he was using websites, he never knew that those sources only contain peripheral information.Also, he didn't put into consideration that it is much easier for the professor to detect that the assignment is plagiarism.If he hadn't try to make use of textbook, he wouldn't have discovered his achilles heel.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that printed books will continue to remain a good source for research.This is because it does not contain errors and because it provides comprehensive information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, i feel, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06970509383 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09359448199 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56836461126 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.1344086022 228% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 307.685487755 48.9658058833 628% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.375 100.406767564 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.625 20.6045352989 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.45110844103 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174276313508 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075112287704 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482556270889 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959867882365 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368870106947 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 11.7677419355 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 58.1214874552 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.1575268817 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.0537634409 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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