Earth will eventually run out of resources, and it is about time that we thought of another planet to live in. In response to such concern, Mars has been selected as a suitable candidate. The good news is that astronomers and scientists have also succeeded in finding some ideal characteristics for Mars to be humanity’s next habitat.
To start, there is a high possibility that Mars contains liquid water, which is an essential resource for all living things. To detect the presence of water, Mars Express Mission used radar to send electromagnetic waves and analyzed the soil inside the south and the north pole of Mars that are filled with large ice caps. Shortly afterward, the radar sent back a different colored wave. Since different colored waves mean different elements, scientists believe that it could be a sign of liquid water.
Secondly, life on Earth may be able to endure the Martian atmosphere. To be specific, scientists asserted that life is possible on Mars after discovering microbes living in the harshest environment on Earth. Microbes make a living in the valleys of Antarctica, which has a similar environment to the extremely cold and dry surface of Mars. Antarctica also receives high ultraviolet radiation, another similarity to the Martian atmosphere, which lacks a sufficient protective magnetic field. With these being considered, it may seem possible for human beings to survive the Martian conditions in the near future.
Lastly, Curiosity rover (NASA's Mars Exploration Program) has detected traces of methane gas in the Martian atmosphere. It was a sensation when Curiosity found 0.4 parts per billion level of methane in 2012 and discovered that the amount increased up to 7 parts per billion in 2014. This strongly supported the fact that there are methane emissions on Mars. As a result, considering that methane is a valuable resource for people to survive, such a discovery has sustained the claim that Mars will become the next home for humanity.
The article introduces the topic of reasons why Mars is suitable place to leave after Earth run out of resources. More specifically, the writer talk about three characteristic that scientists have found which make Mars suitable planet to live for human. In the listening passage, the lecturer is quick to point some serious flaws in the article. In addition, the also address the reasons for his diagreement.
To begin with writer state that there is a chances that Mars has a liquid water. Because with the help of radar scientist analyzed the waves and it is the different colour wave, which means there is a water present. However, the professor in the lecture refute this by stating that to compare the wave on Earth and Mras is not possible because Earth is active and warm so there is liquid water present. On the other hand, Mars is inactive and too cold for water to present in liquid state. Also, the wave can be other element. As a result, It can be says that Mars contain water is lawful.
The second characteristic writer say is harshest environment in earth there is microbes lives and also added that Antarctica receives high ultraviolet radiation, which is similar to Marsh. Again, the lecturer is deprecated this viewpoint by stating that Mars's harsh environment might be possible for life to microbes, but it is not possible to live for humans. In addition, he says that on Mars temperature is very drastically, due to that humans can freeze or burn to death. So, the lecturer completely disagrees is the writer's opinion.
Lastly, the writer gave the methane gas detected in the marsh by curiosity rover. Furthermore, he added that in comparison to 2012 there is an increase in the level of methane gas in 2014. Although, the professor in the listening passage disagrees by saying that result of curiosity rover is reliable because it has a limited level to measure methane gas and also it is a malfunction. Moreover, he added that result of the European agency stated that there in no increase in the level of methane gas. Furthermore, ISAT did a whole surface of Mars check and they did not find a presence of methane gas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 372.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76612903226 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62727116291 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5981483805 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3157894737 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126521733433 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394524544376 0.0996497079465 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047970056489 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850960222011 0.162205337803 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069118547855 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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