Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online game, and social networking Web site.
It is generally believe that education is an essential requirement in every society that each family have some children who need to have plan for spending spare time. Given the issue, there are many approaches to education in primary school. However, there is some problem for educating children because of student spend so many times in order to play cell phone, online game, and etc. In my point of view, each school that has approach to education can benefit of some modern technology to education.
First of all, the most important reason is using cellphone for another purpose. They can use it not only talking with their friend but also learning something of their friend. For instance, when I studied in high school, I talked with my friend to many time. However, before we had some exams, we had reviewed some important part of our book together that we had some problems. Therefore, if the school learned to student that use phone to useful purpose, I didn't think that educating children is a more difficult task then past.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe social network is so helpful to education. By the advent of modern technology, the widespread change is created in our life. Some of student can use social network for doing their homework. Moreover, their knowledge can increase by searching on net. For example, I had a presentation that didn't know anything about specific topic. Frankly speaking it was so difficult and my knowledge wasn't sufficient. Thus, I decide to search on different website to read useful information about my topic.
Finally, although student spends many times on cell phone, online game, and another modern technology, they can increase their knowledge by them. Therefore, education children wouldn’t be a difficult task.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
It is generally believe that education is an essential requirem...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ily have some children who need to have plan for spending spare time. Given the issu...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... order to play cell phone, online game, and etc. In my point of view, each school that h...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...high school, I talked with my friend to many time. However, before we had some exams, we ...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ent that use phone to useful purpose, I didnt think that educating children is a more...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ating children is a more difficult task then past. Another reason why I disagre...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en is a more difficult task then past. Another reason why I disagree with the ...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... For example, I had a presentation that didnt know anything about specific topic. Fra...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ng it was so difficult and my knowledge wasnt sufficient. Thus, I decide to search on...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en wouldn't be a difficult task.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, frankly, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06644518272 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60716283401 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5614329166 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7222222222 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258326570416 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07877750197 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090241851204 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17356109044 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806571290029 0.0443174109184 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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