Elephants
The author remarks several beliefs about elephant behaviors. The lecturer, however, points to the inaccuracies in each of those beliefs.
First, the writer makes the point that elephants could realize who will die in the near future time, so they leave their herds to go to specific locations like lakes to die alone. However, the lecturer demonstrates a different idea that elderly elephants lose the power of chewing food because of their weak teeth. So they would prefer to live near lakes to graze softer vegetables that grow near bodies of water.
Second, according to the reading, elephants have an artistic ability because some elephants have been known to paints tangible things like flowers, other elephants also themselves. The lecturer, by contrast, suggests that elephants may draw those paintings through someone's help. In other words, their tutor touch different location of elephants' ears to direct them to draw different things. So drawing is not an inherent elephants' ability.
Finally, the author states that elephants scare mice base on the Roman philosopher, and some scientists wrote. They said elephants are afraid mice that could not harm them more than hazardous animals like lion or tigers. Besides, scientists preserve when elephants observe mice near their herd; they flee to avoid them. By contrast, the professor refutes that elephants would scare them because they do not know them in their living environments. The lecturer also provides an example to support his idea that elephants who live in the zoo have never scared mice because they know mice do not harm them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 423, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elephants'' or 'elephant's'?
Suggestion: elephants'; elephant's
...t things. So drawing is not an inherent elephants ability. Finally, the author stat...
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Line 13, column 136, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[8]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'of': 'afraid of mice'.
Suggestion: afraid of mice
...ientists wrote. They said elephants are afraid mice that could not harm them more than haza...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26744186047 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44082665454 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2529177225 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443604853352 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187900022109 0.0996497079465 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103358893943 0.0662205650399 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279221422048 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118277452144 0.0443174109184 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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