Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperature constant. for instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37 degree no matter whether the environment is cold or warm, polar dinosaurs, leg position and movement, haversian canals
The reading supports the claim that dinosaurs are endotherms like mammals and modern birds, which means they can maintain their body temperature at 37 degrees regardless the surrounding temperature weather it’s warm or cold. The lecture however strongly refutes the reading for the following reasons.
First, the reading claims that the fossils found in the polar region support that dinosaurs are endotherms because only endotherms could live in temperature above their inner temperature. However, the lecture challenges this by the warmer weather in polar region back in time when dinosaurs existed and mentions that they could have migrated at time where it was colder or hibernated like modern reptiles.
Second, the reading believes that the position of the legs underneath not on sides of their bodies resemble that of endotherms. Because this legs position allows endotherms to run. Meanwhile, the lecture disagrees with this and states that the leg position allows dinosaurs to walk despite of their huge weight. Therefore, the leg position and movement proof are not well founded.
Finally, the reading supports the claim that dinosaurs are endotherms by the presence of haversian canals in their body structure which allows for rapid body growth in endotherms. the lecture refutes this by mentioning that dinosaurs also have growth rings which is characteristic of animals that are not endotherms.
In conclusion, while the reading claims that dinosaurs are endotherms, the lecture proves that all the claims are not valid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir bodies resemble that of endotherms. Because this legs position allows endotherms to...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ws for rapid body growth in endotherms. the lecture refutes this by mentioning that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45188284519 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63212841599 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497907949791 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1784347319 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269310187416 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105018260507 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930059406763 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149401048717 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922485229739 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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