Expressionists
The reading passage was about abstract expressionism and the features of the paintings that fit to the description of it. The professor lectured about Jackson Pollock, who is known as one of the American greatest artists. He mentioned some of the characteristics of Pollock works, which was in accordance to the description of abstract expressionist paintings, provided by the reading.
The first characteristic of Pollock works is his mastery in creating a sense of movement and flow in his works. He put a large canvas on the floor and applied paints from all four directions to it; So that he could convey a message of activity to the observers. This is in agreement with the passage that indicates abstract expressionists have had an emphasis on the act of painting rather than the details of the objects.
The second one is that Pollock had improvised a method for splattering paint over the canvas. He held a brunch about one foot above the canvas and made paint drops on it. His specific method had led to his trademark drip. The passage also highlights that abstract expressionists gave especial attention to the surface quality of paint. They tried several methods to give unique and expressive characters to the paint itself.
The last thing is that Pollock used to paint on extra large canvases. He applied pain all over it and made twisted color patterns, while the canvas was laid down horizontally. The passage also states that abstract expressionists had a preference for large canvas. They put it on the ground to be capable of reaching all its corners
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...American greatest artists. He mentioned some of the characteristics of Pollock works, which...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k drip. The passage also highlights that abstract expressionists gave especial at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89294940906 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7228088987 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140367393514 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541478643777 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090563871587 0.0662205650399 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972397813597 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0094072190319 0.0443174109184 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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