The extended family is less important now than it was in the past.
The family is a blessing for a human being. People grow up in a family leaning a lot of things about this mysterious world from the family members. Previously, it was a common trait to live in a big family where grandparents, parents, cousins, aunts, uncles, brothers, and sisters lived together. But, nowadays people are mostly living in a family that is much smaller than the expended one. I completely agree with the given statement that the extended family nowadays is not as important as it was previously. I feel this way for some specific reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people are getting more sincere about the education of their children that the past because, without proper education, one can't live a prestigious life in this competitive world. In extended families, there are a lot of people live together and if a lot of people live together in a single house, it is natural that the environment of the house will be noisy. As a result, the kids will not get a proper environment for doing their studies. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I have spent my childhood in a joint extended family where twelve people lived together. So, the house was always noisy. When I sat to study in my reading room, my other little cousins used to come into my room and talked to me or created chaos in the room. Moreover, the elder people of the house were always talking to one another. So, the environment was so noisy that I could not concentrate on my study. Consequently, I did very bad in one of my public exams. After that event, my parents realized the situation and they decided to live separately in a nearby town. This time, I got a good environment to be attentive to my studies and eventually, I did better in my next public exam.
In this era of globalization, most people leave their hometown and go to live in places where they can find more facilities. Every year, a lot of people are going to America from the Indian sub-continent in search of a better life. So, they all have to leave their relatives back in their hometowns. My own country, Bangladesh is a good example of this situation. As Dhaka is the capital of Bangladesh, people can find most of the modern life facilities in Dhaka. So, every year a lot of people are coming to Dhaka from their hometowns from all around the country leaving their relatives in their hometowns. I have also come to Dhaka 2 years earlier after my graduation from an Engineering University which is situated in a little town named Khulna. Since then I am living with one of my cousins here. As the daily expenses are too high compared to the other small cities of the country, people in Dhaka tend to live in small families. Because it is hard to bear the expenses of a lot of people here. Moreover, most of the living apartments in Dhaka can afford only 4 or 5 people at a time. For these, specific reasons, people are living in Dhaka in small families.
To conclude, I think, small families are more suitable for the contemporary world because the kids can get a good environment for their study. Moreover, the expense of living in a place where one can find all the modern facilities is too high to live in a large family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, i feel, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 10.4613686534 249% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 30.3222958057 300% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2666.0 1373.03311258 194% => OK
No of words: 585.0 270.72406181 216% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55726495726 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.04702891845 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60766079198 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 145.348785872 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441025641026 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 868.5 419.366225166 207% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 13.0662251656 245% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9843593437 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3125 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28125 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06452816374 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.27373068433 374% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102807155529 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327467410461 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585860014866 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844919122842 0.162205337803 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093925109129 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.3589403974 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 63.6247240618 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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