Hali snow
The article states that cloud seeding is an effective method for conserving the farm lands from the bad effect of snow or rain and he provides three reasons for its support. Conversely, the professor explains that there are no exact explanations and visible improvement of cloud seeding, rather it is an apparent solution which is not substantiated by proper logic
First, the reading claims that in the laboratory experiment , it is proved that cloud seeding is accurately functioning as by adding silver iodide and cold water vapor, scientists often looked light snow formation instead of hali pellets. Turning to other side of the argument, the professor opposes the view point that albeit siver-iodide works, it prevents the chance of rain.So there is enough chance of occurring draught.
Second, the author posits that in the central asian countries, cloud seeding is used to control precipitation in the urban areas.That's why, it can be effectively installed in the USA for protecting fields and farm.;In this respect, the lecture opines a different point that due to lack of water and pollution, it worked well in that ares. But in the unpolluted areas of the usa like as in the farm land it will work can't be emphasized properly.
Third, the article asserts that cloud seeding is conducive as it can reduce the effect of hali damage and it is seen in a farming region of central USA. But the professor is of reciprocal opinion in this regard. He wholeheartedly depicts that it is not convincing that why only an area is observed such case. However,in the central USA the local weather may be suitable for damaging the hali, it may not work well in the other areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...provement of cloud seeding, rather it is an apparent solution which is not substa...
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...ich is not substantiated by proper logic First, the reading claims that in the la...
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...claims that in the laboratory experiment , it is proved that cloud seeding is accu...
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Suggestion: So
...e works, it prevents the chance of rain.So there is enough chance of occurring dra...
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...seeding is used to control precipitation in the urban areas.Thats why, it can be ...
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...ntrol precipitation in the urban areas.Thats why, it can be effectively installed in...
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...ntrol precipitation in the urban areas.Thats why, it can be effectively installed in...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...polluted areas of the usa like as in the farm land it will work cant be emphasize...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: CANT[1]
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... like as in the farm land it will work cant be emphasized properly. Third, the art...
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...y an area is observed such case. However,in the central USA the local weather may b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89788732394 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307554847 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.456046899 49.2860985944 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 110.228320801 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 21.698381199 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138355325651 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480476357226 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056581657892 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784225714492 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546128697768 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.7273730684 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.2008830022 259% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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