Today there is a lot of negative news on TV and social media. Some believe that it is a good idea to stop watching the news and take a break while others do not. What is your position?
No doubt it is admitted that most of the people feel the need of distinguishing the truth and false but who will take the charge of this onerous job. That's why it is in the hidden phase of expressing the positive and negative news of this world. In consideration of this scenario, it is understood that we are living our life in an ruthless era where people not only take the benefit from the modern world but also bereft from the new arena of his life. Conversely it is well said that people are agreed on this topic that we have to sustain in this intermingled area by deciphering the real truth of the world, which is why I wholeheartedly do believe the negative response of the above topic.
To embark on, if we bereft us from bad news and overlook social media, who will confront the bad situation. None the man who left this using. Basically in this world there are no one good point, rather good is mixed with the bad.In this view we have to find out the theme of any happening. For instance, my friend is very pious and invariably he tries to follow the righteous path of Islam. In the meantime, he hears the negative information about the Muslim as they are terrorist, their psychology is outdated and even if they use women with their own accord.Consequently he took decision to observe social media and news channel. But in the long run he is worst sufferer as he kept himself aloof from the positive points of this world. Actually he does not know why new our minister have activated 4G machine, why people are rushing in the information sector. However these positive points are overlooked by my friends and its effect is huge as he is not up-to date in this modern world.
In addition, in order to distinguish the world we have to perform our charge in this society in such a way that we can wholeheartedly find out the best thing in our life. What I mean by this is that if we keep us aloof from this intricate negativity of this world , basically we are the looser. In future we will fail to select our best option. For example, if I want to live in this society, we have to tolerate the scene of thief and smuggler. In the similar fashion, we also have o digest the theme of having the pros and cons of negative effect of social media. From that negative effect we eventually sharpen our capacity and will be serious for finding out the best option in our life. As a result, it will make us more adaptive and make a credence in my heart that I have to be more inclined to the right path. From my personal experience,my bosom friend is a public icon who faced a harassment in the early days. All news channel exaggerated negative information, but he did not loose his hope, he tried to search new path to prove him as an ideal person in this society. On the other hand if he distracts, we will deem him as a looser.
Last but not least, if we take a break from news channel, it will act as a tonic in our whole life. In effect we will not grab the neutral and life-related information. For instance, HIV virus disease at now is easy to handle. If I don't know the information and try to falsify the scientists, it is not tenable. Actually we have to go through the process. From my experience, my friend are not aware about the system of Bangladesh cricket board and if our players play bad, he wholeheartedly impute them.But in actual practice we don't keep us in the dark of
To wrap it up, it is very cumbersome to provide the open ended question's problem. So although some may oppose my purview, it is very clear like water that negative influence of news and social media most of the time will hamper our notion and we have to figure out the most optimum solution to legalize our point. In this world only thorough keeping positive outlook can't we go a long way, we have to embellish all the negative also by treading our legs in this intrigued world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, conversely, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 109.0 43.0788530466 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3168.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 720.0 407.700716846 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18004012822 4.48103885553 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51673823608 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 212.727598566 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452777777778 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1016.1 618.680645161 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8669181029 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63333333333 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115603479589 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356168009321 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430570902913 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077169308328 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215437704626 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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