Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
Life is full of weal and woe. He has to pass myriad circumstances throughout his life. Sometimes, he has to surpass his life not only in fruition but also in an onerous way. As a part of harrowing experiences, people have to be ready to check it; otherwise, he will be submerged into a cave of oblivion. So people have to take vigor to overcome bitter experiences effectively. Moreover, these trenchant circumstances surely bring about success for future life. That's why I agree with the above statement.
To embark on, a difficult situation is a beneficiary, more specifically a blessing for post-life. We have to face countless stiffness alongside our life. So to overthrow that irreversibility needs valor this plays a superb role throughout our whole life. For instance, last year, we five friends had to go Himalaya for an office project to accomplish our surveying the temperature at different points of the hilly tracts. No doubt, this hazardous work needs huge bravery without which soft-heartened people can't perform the tasks. But it was a very surprising matter that we ascended the 200m height of Himalaya in order to measure with full aplomb. Additionally, it is said that adverse weather, the hardship of ascending hilly tracts were snatching our mettle, but our valor was so recondite that we might overthrow it. Actually, its learning paves a way to tolerate the bitter situation quite easily at now. Amidst of three days, I have to accomplish three projects of 100 m height hilly tract, but it seems very placid for my previous experience. Actually, previous experience makes it easier.
In addition, facing difficult situation grows aplomb affluently. Even if, its mettle can't be imagined in a way. It easily arouses the thoughtfulness in a different way that drives our willingness comfortably. For example, my uncle died last month. No sooner had I heard the news when my company sacked me for my poor performance. At that condition, I was puzzled of what type of situation was going on. But keeping aplomb on my heart, I worked hard and at last, I got a good job. That's why having belief and aplomb made those tasks effectively.
Furthermore, saving money is to be fantasized into the mind of all people. In this case, we all know getting money is not a trifling matter; rather it carries away risks. For example, if we look at the businessman, they are very brave in taking risks. Not only risks but also impeding difficult situation makes themselves recondite to earn money. My friend, a share-holder businessman invariably faces onerous circumstances of share in such a deceptive way that he must calculate what type of loss is to occur if market share fails. Moreover, when he is in a distress condition, he functions his money intelligently to gain money. As a result, he saves money a lot.
Finally, it is said that the embodiment of inspiration is gathered via onerous situation's setbacks. From my experience, last year I lost my bicycle. At that moment, I had to face accountability with my brother and he berated me in such a way that I lost my will of study. After a few days, I made up my mind to go abroad for my study in the future. Whenever I stood first in class eight challenging that toughest situation of insult, I was so inspired that it helped me to get a scholarship of the USA by the virtue of exact inspiration.
To wrap it up, life is short but at the same time, it's one of the longest events we will ever have to ensure. Experience is always our teacher, which makes us strong, focused to not to repeat the same mistakes, self-confidence, and many things. If we think deeper of every moment’s pain, suffering or happiness will always leave you something to learn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an onerous way" with adverb for "onerous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... his life not only in fruition but also in an onerous way. As a part of harrowing experiences, pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ery without which soft-heartened people cant perform the tasks. But it was a very su...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... aplomb affluently. Even if, its mettle cant be imagined in a way. It easily arouses...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y. It easily arouses the thoughtfulness in a different way that drives our willingness comfortably...
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Suggestion: That's
...ked hard and at last, I got a good job. Thats why having belief and aplomb made those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3081.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 643.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79160186625 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92251800324 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 212.727598566 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527216174184 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 970.2 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5978219098 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.025 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.075 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1417102692 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327382904245 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337911931075 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697604484428 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409237554979 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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