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Either subjects of the lecture and the reading points to whether the gigantic edmontosaur potentially can relinquish their habitat and move to warmer areas during cold seasons. The reading implies that the edmontosaur migrated to warmer and desirable zones for surviving the winter. However, the lecture casts a shadow of doubt on the proposed ideas of the passage in which they have been reasonably disapproved by the same source.
The first and for most, the lecture brings up the idea that about one hundred years ago, the artic regions summer was warmer than today. Hence, both there were acceptable conditions for growing plants and plentiful vegetarians were accessed as edmontosaur's nutrition. By beginning of winter, the edmontosaur could find abundant dead vegetarians that germinate during summer. Nevertheless, this entirely refutes the reading which states that the edmontosaur had to migrate because of lack of plants.
Another comprehensible statement against the article is that animals can live in herd for several reasons such as extra-protection from predators. In addition, the Roselcies are a kind of large animal which live in the forest located western United State, but do not migrate. Nonetheless, the reading mentions that living in herd provided the edmontosaur to go to new and heater areas.
Finally, the lecture contends that juvenile edmontosaurs were not able to move long distances physically and their speed was too slow. Moreover, their adults could not leave juvenile alone in harsh artic area, since they would not survive by themselves. This directly contradicts with what the reading indicates that the edmontosaurs could pass long distances by using their physical features like high speed.
In sum up, the lecture rejects the edmontosaurs migration idea according to some hypothesizes.
Sentence: Either subjects of the lecture and the reading points to whether the gigantic edmontosaur potentially can relinquish their habitat and move to warmer areas during cold seasons.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
for surviving the winter.
for surviving in the winter.
in which they have been reasonably disapproved by the same source.
Description: 'they' refers to what?
both there were acceptable conditions for growing plants and plentiful vegetarians were accessed as edmontosaur's nutrition
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
a kind of large animal which live in the forest located western United State
a kind of large animal which lives in the forest located in the western United State
Sentence: The first and for most, the lecture brings up the idea that about one hundred years ago, the artic regions summer was warmer than today.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to regions and summer
Sentence: The first and for most, the lecture brings up the idea that about one hundred years ago, the artic regions summer was warmer than today.
Error: artic Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 284 250
No. of Characters: 1512 1200
No. of Different Words: 173 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.324 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.761 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.972 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4