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Integrated essay online encyclopedia vs traditional
The author states the disadvantages of online encyclopedias. On the other hand, the speaker opposes the author's view by giving the benefits of communal encyclopedia based on the points of easier and faster to repair context, strategies to avoid hackers, and unlimited space.
The speaker's first argument is that online encyclopedia along with traditional ones are inaccurate. However, communal encyclopedia can be fixed faster and easier than traditional encyclopedia, in which errors could be long-lasting. This casts doubt upon the author's point regarding traditional encyclopedia being comple...
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 239 250
No. of Characters: 1337 1200
No. of Different Words: 130 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.594 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.135 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.8 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4