integrated essay TPO18
The reading mainly discusses about a type of overgreen tree which grows in the state of Florida and its name is Torreya taxifona, population of this tree is becoming extinct and it provides three solution to protecting this tree. On the other hand, in the listening, the professor does not agree with these reasons and he believes that htese methods are not satisfactory.
First of all, the article asserts that if Torreya reveals in the same erea for a long time, it will be find a btter microclimate on that region and can grow in the similar weather condition. On the contrary, the speaker refuses this idea and argues that htis way is not like to successful by changing climate due to we are observing global warming and soroundning this erea is warming and to be dried. Thus, the torreya needs to survive and its extinct dose not related to its climate condition.
In addition, the reading claims that by moving this tree to a new environment and location we can improve a growing its drasticaly. However, the speaker oposits that when a new specises coming to a new environment, it will be dangerous for that location and it is not predictable.
As a result, the passage states that for preserve and protect this tree, it is necessary to seeds and saplings its by research centers. While the professor rejects this view and he believes that research centers dont able to servive this tree due to they need more capacities and the Trroreya population not capable of many diseases for a long time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not related to its climate condition. In addition, the reading claims that by ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...w and he believes that research centers dont able to servive this tree due to they n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73764258555 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60685697296 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.655497582 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.444444444 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271948564055 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110096423628 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065625150527 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149316548833 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050165151579 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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