integrated essay tpo 42
The reading mainly states that nowadays architectures sue more glass in many buildings which is so dangerous and harmful for birds, and he provides some reasons to solve this problem. However, the professor in the listing believes that these solutions are not effective and he rejects the author's view with bringing some reasons.
Firstly, the article asserts that people should apply more one-way glass in their buildings that birds cannot see in. While, the speaker argues that one-way glass can reflect outside such as mirror that birds think this is sky or trees and try to fly through it. So this solution is not effective.
Secondly, in the passage section bring another solution that paint colorful lines can be effective that birds avoid of it, people can use this design in their windows. On the contrary, the lecture believes that this design will bring some problems such as darkness of the rooms the rooms and also birds try to fly into them due to this paints are actually small and birds cannot distinguish them.
Finally, the author discuses that magnetic field can be useful because birds use this natural abilities too. On the other hand, the professor supports article’s idea related to birds use magnetic field in their paths when the immigrate, but birds apply this way for traveling in long distant befor trarting winter in all over world or between another cities, and for short trips they fly by light and their eyes. This solution cannot cannot be useful too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the rooms'.
Suggestion: the rooms
...bring some problems such as darkness of the rooms the rooms and also birds try to fly into them due...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... also birds try to fly into them due to this paints are actually small and birds can...
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Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... use magnetic field in their paths when the immigrate, but birds apply this way for traveling...
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Line 6, column 432, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: cannot
... by light and their eyes. This solution cannot cannot be useful too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97609561753 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26211336377 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7189809506 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06452816374 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432944881197 0.272083759551 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166528688198 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763936875238 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245872688106 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921516965897 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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