Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Even though many sociolists and some of the people argue as if it is a general truth that indivitail group is more enjoyable and it is more satisfied, i firmly recommend that traveling by a tour guide is the best way for people. this way is less expensive and makes much mony to saving, addition, reduceing environmental impacts. And believe it or not, the tour guide is a remarkable situation for have a great tome in traveling. I will elaborate my idea with some significant reasons in th following paragraphs.
One of the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that people want to save thier money in every conditions as well as. the tour guide is a convineince technique that prepare this circumstance. As a matter of fact, by enhansing the prices of goods, transortations, hotels, foods sunstantiat, and somthing like that, poeple are looking for cheep prices to traveling. As a my experince ti illustrate this idea, last year I went to turky by a tour guide which it was so useful for me, due to I dis not have to pay much money for booke a high-price hotel and we ate meal in a fame local town that our leader foughnd it. Not only are the tour guide helpful for poor people to traveling, but also this method make more admiration and inspiring to go another cities and countries. As you can see, sometimes people cant think to traveling becouse of it is so expensive.
Another my remarkable reason is that when people travel in a group by tour guide, they can leave thier personal cars in the parking and go by some big automoble, trains or eirtravelings that thier manager provids it. This method is a perfect way to preserve the environment to decrease to releas variouse toxic and dangreous gases that refuse in air. As a example, I am a environmentalist and I considerd more studies depend on this sobject.
As result, all of the reasons related above, display people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64391691395 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79842883377 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.383954749 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149453660748 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049508890348 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384475729211 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911265338628 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041643670973 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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