Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Even though maney sociolists and most of the people argue as if it is ageneral truth that people need to follow the one sources of news and event, i firmlly recommend that in the complex world and various sources of information, people have to get information from several sources. to be more sure of the true or false of information and also for complicating and get more details of information people have to gain their information of many sources. And belive it or not, a person need to achiave verity of information of several sources. I will elaborate my idea with the significant reasons in the following prographs.
One of the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that todays with inhancing to different sources of neas and event, people should search and seek about information that they obtian is real or not. As a matter of fact, when there are maney sources of information, people can not distingoush which of them is true. As an example, i have never understood which of the TV' news are more real that happen in our country, for this reaon i used to check another source to increasing my information to b well-informed.
Another my remarkable reason is that if people wants to witness the elaborated and complicated information, they hsould track and discover a more soureces of events. For instance, when i decided to select my thesis in university, i found that some journals were more sofisticated and some of them explained my topice entirly, thus i searched a lot of articls and website to get well-informed.
As a result, when people want to be more expert of some news and events and have real information, they have to choose many sourecs. as i am a student i try improve my knowlwdge of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72607260726 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83852174918 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0628174744 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173801673772 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668930988868 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464103338419 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102859077012 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545484415022 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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