Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
In my opinion, students are more influenced by their friends rather than their teachers.
Therefore, I disagree with the statement 'Students are more influenced by their
teachers than by their friends'.
I do not disagree with the fact that students get influenced by their teachers,
however, I believe that this 'influence' is mostly within the field of academics. In
most cases, the only time that students communicate with the teacher is in the
school building, in the classroom. Most of the discussions are about topics related
to studies. However, with friends, students often tend to discuss a variety of topics,
such as studies, friends, relationships and families. Therefore, students are generally
influenced more broadly by their friends, while the only influence made by the
teachers are mostly academical.
The amount of time spent with the teacher or friend, also effect on how much
influence has been made to a person. As mentioned previously, the time that students
communicate with the teachers is restricted to school hours. However, students
spend or communicate with their friends not only in school but even outside
the school campus and school hours. Especially with the emerging technology, and
the development of mobile phones and the internet, students are now able to communicate
with their friends at any time where ever they are. Since the amount of
time spent communicating with their friends are much larger than the time spent
with the teachers, there are more chance of the students being influenced by their
friends rather than their teachers.
Also, it is normal that the students feel psychologically more attached to the people
in their age group, especially with their friends. The teachers are usually from
different generations from the students and this may cause the students to feel
that there is a distance between how they think/feel and how the teachers think/
feel. Since the students are more emotionally and psychologically attached to their
friends, they feel more comfortable to discuss their issues with them and accept
their responses more openly and easily. This fact relates directly to how much they
are influenced by their friends.
For these reasons, I believe that students are more influenced by their friends
than by their teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'do disagree that' or 'do agree that'.
Suggestion: do disagree that; do agree that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3722826087 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72354601912 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39402173913 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1328601221 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.294117647 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.53405017921 684% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.555262208191 0.236089414692 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238257696459 0.076458572812 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158821321538 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191063722049 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133467276397 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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