Lambeosaurus dinosaur

Essay topics

The article outlines three possible explanations regarding the function of lambeosaurus crests: sense of smell, cooling and for producing sounds. The lecturer, on the other hand, argues that it is unclear if these functions proposed are true.

First and foremost, to improve the sense of smell, the author of the article notes that crests had many blood vessels and that it is logical to believe that lambeosaurus had a developing smell sense because many current animals with a high smell sense have the same density blood vessel pattern. The speaker, however, questions if this is correct and says that the cavity brain of lambeosaurus, which contains nerves connected to smell, is tiny, making it impossible to support that lambeosaurus evolved a smell sense.

Second, the author emphasizes that lambeosaurus crests aid to control internal temperature by increasing surface area and letting body heat to escape, as seen in other species such as the stegosaurus. The speaker, on the other hand, claims that the surface area of crests does not represent an advantage for temperature regulation because its size is smaller in comparison to other species such as stegosaurus, which have a representative high surface area allowing them to regulate their internal temperature.

Finally, the author claims that crests were employed to generate sounds, maybe to communicate, and a developed inner ear in lambeosaurus funding in fossils supported it. In contrast, the speaker points out that in only one species of lambeosaurus discovered excellent hearing abilities, therefore there is no proof that all species use crests to communicate, and researchers are skeptical of this notion.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, in contrast, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9014953714 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7638362255 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 110.228320801 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 21.698381199 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06452816374 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153074777463 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755442043552 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052760626475 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934115715592 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337857713036 0.0443174109184 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.3589403974 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.8541721854 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.2367328918 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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