Most people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; However,there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this,and a more balanced personal life. Di
Grammar and spelling errors:
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oth the reading and the lecture about Chaco...
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...oned in the reading is not persuasive. First of all, the author claims that the...
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Suggestion: it
..., that if this evidence is right, there is should be a lot of fireplaces so the ca...
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Suggestion: existed
...an cook to all the people, which is not exist. Secondly, the author states that...
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...to all the people, which is not exist. Secondly, the author states that the hou...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...of the crop in the ground and there are no many rooms for the store. Finally,...
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...there are no many rooms for the store. Finally, the author mentions that this h...
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...e for uses this houses for ceremonies. In conclusion, the lecturer casts doubt ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55183946488 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5225152501 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438127090301 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6938350629 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6315789474 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0634700586891 0.272083759551 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245758427179 0.0996497079465 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313686556924 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362175818661 0.162205337803 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269879027969 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.3589403974 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.8541721854 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language. What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oth
oth the reading and the lecture about Chaco...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oned in the reading is not persuasive. First of all, the author claims that the...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
..., that if this evidence is right, there is should be a lot of fireplaces so the ca...
^^
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...an cook to all the people, which is not exist. Secondly, the author states that...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to all the people, which is not exist. Secondly, the author states that the hou...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...of the crop in the ground and there are no many rooms for the store. Finally,...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there are no many rooms for the store. Finally, the author mentions that this h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for uses this houses for ceremonies. In conclusion, the lecturer casts doubt ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55183946488 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5225152501 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438127090301 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6938350629 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6315789474 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0634700586891 0.272083759551 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245758427179 0.0996497079465 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313686556924 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362175818661 0.162205337803 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269879027969 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.3589403974 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.8541721854 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.