Generally speaking, everything in the world has pros and cons. so we should take in our account the advantages should exceed the disadvantages. needless to say, cars are contributed significantly with our lifestyle. constantly, cars have huge merit in our life, so, it will never be fewer in the coming years.
First and foremost, there is a drastic increase in the global population, without doubt, the demand for the car will increase in turn.admittedly, the prices for the fuel and oil become affordable,, and even the financial offers make purchasing the cars so easy procedure.For example, one family has more than 3 cars, due to the fact that the cats make the life easier.
Secondly, having your own car, it will be more convenient for all the family. For example, my kids are always singing in loud and clapping to an extent no one can bear it solely their mom. apparently, they can do such a thing in public transportation. surely, every family has the same concern just like me. As a matter of the fact, this issue will enforce the family to purchase their own cars, which mean, the car demands increase sequentially.
last but not least, if the count of the cars diminishes in the coming 20 years, this means the public transportation will increase. then, the issue of pollution it will increase also since a lot of smoke will produce due to the overuse of trains and subway. In addition, sometimes the train late, or the station so crowded, and not everyone can accept such issues. Nevertheless, sometimes the traffic is horrible, but at least you have the opportunity to change your way or going somewhere else.
Due to the aforementioned, I firmly believe that the cars count will dramatically increase all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84228187919 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83603903837 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8256975402 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141462541571 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471568598229 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413958659195 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076731909434 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014377762214 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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