The surroundings have a tremendous impact on our progress and well-being. In fact, they can enhance our success in immeasurable ways because they encompass our core values. Therefore, I strongly agree that it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that will affect your daily life because any event might effect on our life in both direct and indirect ways.
First and foremost, a lot of events happen in the world might affect our lives in a direct and persist way like technology. The advent of Technology has provided an opportunity for the pervasive problems of society to create solutions to solve any obstacle that might people face and this matter has an important influence on our life. For example, people always follow a new invention due to the fact that this would change their life like Mobile. Needless to say, every year there is something new for the mobile which enhances people to have a new version for this device like navigation, google map and the list goes on, which directly affect people's lives and make it so much easier. Consequently, any event in the world might affect our life, so we have to follow up with any event.
Another exquisite point to be mentioned here is that any event in the world might influence our life in an indirect way like a war in any far away country. For example, if there was a conflict situation in any place, this might affect the flight schedule or the prices for goods might going up. Admittedly, following up with an incidence in the world; would help people make clear imagination for a lot of things going on and might help them make a good decision for their life. Therefore, it is so important for people to always checking what's going on around them even when it so far from them because everything might affect people's lives in indirect ways.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, I firmly agree that t is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68245125348 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47544406944 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462395543175 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2724478187 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261663903022 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12295357501 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15327539232 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255460655537 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168149135108 0.0645574589148 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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