The reading states that replacement of nuclear energy to fossile fuel has numbers of advantages. and provide three reasons for support. However, the professor claims that ideally nuclear energy solve problems but the argument is not well thought and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading mentions that the nuclear power plants are inexpensive. While the professor explains that the construction of nuclear power plant is not cheap as it cost more money and time consuming. He adds that the legistimation of each country required to built safety plant to protect public from nuclear threat which is expensive.
Secondly, the reading says that the operating process of nuclear power plant is safe. The professor claims that accidents still happen, current safety process still has devastating effect. He gives one of the exmample of nuclear accident occur at Pennsylvania. There were only small radioactive leackage but no public harm occur but it cost huge financially. He adds that the phychology effect public was severe.
Finally, the reading states that it is easy to manage dangerous radioactive waste made by nuclear power plant. However, the professor claims that due to high level of radioactive waste it is not easy to manage. He adds that high level of waste can be used in nuclear weapon which is real danger to people . So it must be buried deeply underground and location remain safe in case future generation find the site and use the waste for illegal action.
Sentence: However, the professor claims that ideally nuclear energy solve problems but the argument is not well thought and refutes each of author's reasons.
Description: The fragment energy solve problems is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace solve with verb, past tense
Sentence: While the professor explains that the construction of nuclear power plant is not cheap as it cost more money and time consuming.
Description: The word cost is not usually used as a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to cost
Sentence: He adds that the legistimation of each country required to built safety plant to protect public from nuclear threat which is expensive.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and built
Sentence: He gives one of the exmample of nuclear accident occur at Pennsylvania.
Description: The fragment accident occur at is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace occur with verb, past participle
Sentence: There were only small radioactive leackage but no public harm occur but it cost huge financially.
Description: The word cost is not usually used as a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to cost
Sentence: The reading states that replacement of nuclear energy to fossile fuel has numbers of advantages. and provide three reasons for support.
Error: fossile Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: He adds that the legistimation of each country required to built safety plant to protect public from nuclear threat which is expensive.
Error: legistimation Suggestion: legislation
Sentence: He gives one of the exmample of nuclear accident occur at Pennsylvania.
Error: exmample Suggestion: example
Sentence: There were only small radioactive leackage but no public harm occur but it cost huge financially.
Error: leackage Suggestion: leakage
Sentence: He adds that the phychology effect public was severe.
Error: phychology Suggestion: psychology
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 244 250
No. of Characters: 1221 1200
No. of Different Words: 131 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.004 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.732 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.157 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4