Olive trees

Essay topics:

Olive trees

The reading and the lecture are about the most effective methods to protect olive trees from a disease called quick decline syndrome. While the author of the article argues that there are three widely considered methods to be most effective to protect olive trees, the lecturer disputes that. His position is that each method has a drawback that will limit the overall efficacy of it.
According to the reading, the article mentions that early detection of the bacteria is critical to prevent the spread of the disease. Therefore, farmers should regularly look for signs of the disease. This method is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that regular inspection is a time consuming method. Additionally, he points out that most of the time there will be no visual symptoms at the earlystage of this disease.
Secondly, the author suggests that promotion the overallhealthof olive trees is an effective strategy to prevent the spread of the disease. The author notes that trees in a good health are more likely to resist the infection. However, the lecturer asserts that it is not a perfect way to protect olive trees. He goes on to sy that promotion the overall health is not going to guarantee that trees are going to stay healthy. In addition to that, he says that it is an expensive strategy for farmers.
Finally, the author says that reducing the population of the insect that transmit the disease is crucial in controlling the spread of it. The author contends that spraying chemical insecticides is the most effective method for farmers to control insects population. In contrast, the lecturer states that this method is hard to be done probably. He says that many insectsadapt those chemicals, and become resistant to them.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, look, second, secondly, therefore, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98965517241 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65272838703 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489655172414 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5345703813 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202977674632 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626400778743 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956137614153 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127708251684 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133068376258 0.0443174109184 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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