Problem solving and the effect of brake

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Problem-solving and the effect of brake

Based on the passage, problem-solving is a multi-step process that leads us from a question to the right answer. The steps include representation of the problem, figuring out the possible options, choosing a strategy, and taking an action. The professor explains how having a break can boost this process and help us to find out the correct answer.

For the beginning, she states that sleeping on a problem may help the brain to better digest the input information. She gives the example of the Benzene chemical structure to further illustrate her stance. The chemist who discovered the arrangement of carbons in a Benzene molecule owed his discovery to a dream he had about it. This agrees with the point made by the passage that indicates how fixation and holding to a specific way of thinking may hinder our brain from considering all aspects of a problem.

Moreover, the professor highlights that letting our mind relax and be released from concentrating on a problem, usually results in emerging views that we may unintentionally neglect. It seems that when we are not preoccupied with a problem, our unconscious mind sends out some new signals. She illustrated her point by telling about a dome-shaped structure that was too complicated to be designed by routine methods. However, the designer found out how to use triangular-shaped parts to execute the final structure. The passage also mentions that we tend to solve the problem the way that we habitually do.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...ving a break can boost this process and help us to find out the correct answer. For the begi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01089796975 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2655466756 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154728738051 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568831220041 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592137564407 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102156749321 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025967826839 0.0443174109184 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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