pterosaurs
The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about whether pterosaurs are capable of powered flight or they are just capable of glide. Considering this, the author states several arguments against powered flight idea .The professor, on the other hand, thinks pterosaurs are capable of powered flight. She categorically denies three mentioned arguments and categorically denies whatever mentioned in the reading through citing each argument's downsides.
First of all, According to the passage, since pterosaurs re cold-blooded animals, they cannot afford the required energy of powered flight by their metabolisms. The lecturer, nevertheless, dismisses the author's view and points out that discoveries recently show that pterosaurs covered with hairs and furs which are like the covering of warm-blooded animals. She notes that warm-blooded animals need to maintain their body temperature in order to do the activities which requires a lot of energy. As a result, these same metabolisms of pterosaurs and warm-blooded animals demonstrate that it is not hard for them to produce the required energy of powered flight.
Second, the passage goes on to mention that since pterosaurs are mostly heavy, they are not able to flap their wings and make powered flight. Nonetheless, the lecturer supports a contradictory view as compared to that presented in the reading. She persists that pterosaurs are unusually light since their bones are hollowed instead of solid. Moreover, she asserts that because of these hollowed bones pterosaurs weigh low enough to have powered flight.
Eventually, the author states that since pterosaurs' bones and muscles are weak and small, they cannot run fast enough to jump high and lunch into air. However, the speaker refutes this idea, pointing out important differences between birds and pterosaurs. She adds that the two light legs of birds are not for walking on the ground and with them birds can readily launch. Additionally, she indicates that pterosaurs use all their four legs for pushing of ground not just for taking off.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: The
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37116564417 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75028184172 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1159503959 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300231979039 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116323687044 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837863218691 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195106190024 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439644939396 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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