Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
There have been so many concerns in human beings’ life; one of them is finding a suitable place for living which is the best match for their personality and preferences. The question of whether living in the country is a better idea or living in the big city has long been a topic of controversy among people. Some people believe that country life is much more convenient since people living there experience life in a healthier manner with wholesome foods, less polluted air, and less crowded places. However, some others take an opposite point and believe that advantages of city life, such as state-of-the-art hospitals and facilities, and better accessibility, significantly outweigh those of country life. I am inclined to believe that living in the country is much more convenient and beneficial. I cling to this viewpoint for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, by living in the country people can have so many benefits related to their health which can be physical and mental. From among physical health benefits, first, country life usually provides dwellers with wholesome foods and fruits since a large number of people living there do agriculture as their main job. Second, country life gives you an experience of inhaling fresh air which is an essential item for your health condition. For the mental benefit, country places are mostly less crowded consequently, dwellers can experience more peaceful life without hectic any schedules. To put this in a more vivid picture, my close friend confronted an abrupt intense asthma problem last year, as a result of which her doctor forced her to leave Tehran, a big and extremely polluted city. Fortunately, two months after her migration from city to country her asthma problem virtually solved, and she confessed that she experienced great and peaceful life here so was not inclined to come back to the city again. Hence, living in the city can both solve some dweller’s health problems and make diverse health benefits.
Moreover, everything is more expensive in big cities than countries. Owing to this fact, city dwellers should work harder in order to fix their requirements and can afford their expenses. This hard-working makes them truly busy with a hectic lifestyle which is sometimes really boring and intolerable, so they often do not have any time to help other people and make an efficient connection with them. Considering what I mentioned above, city livers are cold and unwelcoming, in most cases, comparing to country dwellers who are kind and warm-blooded. An example of my own drives the fact home. I have experienced a truly hectic life for twenty years due to the fact that I have grown up in the big, crowded and intensely polluted city. However, two years ago I went to the country in order to look after my grandfather for some months. Actually, I became shocked by the behaviors of my grandfather’s neighbors so much. They welcomed me so well that I literally had not expected, and they undoubtedly helped me whenever I faced some problems and I could not solve, also they always questioned me about my condition and my requirements which was really aberrant to me. Therefore, people living in the country have more time to have a connection with each other and are more sociable comparing to city dwellers.
In conclusion, by taking into account the above-mentioned reasons, I firmly prefer to live in the country places rather than big cities. I feel this way because not only can country dwellers attain health benefits, but also they have the chance to become more sociable and warm-blooded. It is highly recommended that people move from cities to countries in order to have a healthier life and live in a more peaceful manner. As a result of this suggestion, cities become less polluted, and the population density balance in all places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
... for their personality and preferences. The question of whether living in the country is a better idea ...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s with wholesome foods and fruits since a large number of people living there do agriculture as t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3255.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 649.0 407.700716846 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01540832049 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04732388556 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79166197075 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1026.0 618.680645161 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9572193639 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.037037037 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96296296296 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168568942886 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502293576342 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457045135528 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112053161479 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252143558602 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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