Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.
The article explains that recently researcher revealed some remains of tissues in the fossil of tyrannosaurus rex dinosaur's leg bone. The lecture completely opposes the point made in the articles. the professor says that the identification of remaining tissues is skeptical.
First, The passage affirms that the leg bone contains small branching channels and it had soft flexible organic substance. This point is contradicted by the lecturer. he says that that substance is not the blood vessel and it is something else. He further says that it may be bacteria that colonize and formed hollow channels, also left behind the trace of residues.
Second, the microscopic examination proves the presence of spheres in the inner bone. The professor claims this point by explaining that spheres are not the remain of red blood cells. Furthermore, the other fossils of primitive that also found at the same place, didn't have spheres. So it may be originated by some reddish minerals.
Finally, The reading proves another test which showed that leg bone contained collagen. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that collagen didn't exist more than 10,000 years and that fossil is 70, million-year-old so it contradicts the point made in the reading. He further says that it may come from other sources like from human during research and handling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...opposes the point made in the articles. the professor says that the identification ...
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Suggestion: He
... point is contradicted by the lecturer. he says that that substance is not the blo...
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...oint by explaining that spheres are not the remain of red blood cells. Furthermore, the ot...
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Suggestion: didn't
...tive that also found at the same place, didnt have spheres. So it may be originated b...
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Suggestion: didn't
... by the lecturer. He says that collagen didnt exist more than 10,000 years and that f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74787295651 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0386139439 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111182813837 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425855136452 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455370246244 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671632756278 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179428969603 0.0443174109184 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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