Both the reading passage and lecturer talks about model portraied in one of Vermeer's masterpiece. The passage presents various theories arised to indentify the model. However, the lecturer refutes these theories by providing necessary grounds.
First, the passage speculates that the model could be Vermeer's own daughter. Since, Vermeer used to get motivated from daily life chores there might be high chance that he painted a familiar person to him; his daughter. A critic also claimed that such an extra-ordinary portray of a daughter can be made only by a father. But, the lecturer doesnot agree with it. According to him, having close intice with daily life activities doesnot necessarily prove he portrayed his daughter. Vermeer has painted about 40 paintings of women and all of them have different faces. These women could be anyone. Hence, it doesnot necessarily provide evidience to prove it was his daughter.
In addition to this, the passage claims that the model could be daughter of his contemporary compatriot. Maybe his companion might have requested him to portray his daughter. Also, this theory might be true because the painting was gifted to his friend in his wedding night. However, the lecturer is totally agains it. The society during those time were conservative one. So, nobody would ask a painter to paint their daughter in such unconventional clothings as of the model in tha painting. Instead, the lecturer thinks the portray may be of some higher class figure.
Finally, the passage links the model with tronie theory which was famous at the time of paintaing. The model in the painting might be an imaginary figure. With more focus on face of the model by adjusting light and darkness, the portray conveys a principle of Tronie paintings. On the contrary the lecturer feels the theory doesnot match. According to lecturer, the other paintings made by Vermeer were not imaginary but just virtual representation. Scenery represented in the paintings cannot be labeled imaginary. Hence, the lecturer is against the claims of the passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... painting. Instead, the lecturer thinks the portray may be of some higher class figure. Fi...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... model by adjusting light and darkness, the portray conveys a principle of Tronie paintings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66874019035 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.281612401 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.27373068433 445% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185227530654 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552590771838 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520050626965 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131212554829 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325141532755 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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