The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about declination of bird population in United States. The writer claims three reasons beyond this declination. However, the lecturer contradicts these reasons. She thinks, each reason is mentioned in reading passage is inconvenience.
To begin with, the author states increase in human population as a one reason of decrease in number of birds. This is mainly because, these population need more houses which are built and birds habitats disappear. This statement is challenged by professor. She mentions, not all types of birds decrease by building. Some types of birds increase like bengiuns and other types. Therefore, this reason is not convineince because, some population of bird which are increased can be as a food sources to other types of birds. As a result, this argument is inconvenience.
In addition. the author asserts, increase in agriculcure will destroy birds habitats. these agricultcurs need more land to grow crops. The professor refutes this notion. She says, increase of agrticultcure is done by increase growind of valuable crops without increase in land which is used to grow these crops. So thid statement is not correct.
Finally, the author presents pesticides which are used in agriculture spread in food and water of birds. Birds wil, dye after eat or drinks these contamenated food and drink water or decrease in rate of reproduction will happen. The lecturer has a different point of view. She illustrates to new types of pesticides which do not harm to birds.
The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about declination of bird population in United States. The writer claims three reasons beyond this declination. However, the lecturer contradicts these reasons. She thinks, each reason is mentioned in reading passage is inconvenience.
To begin with, the author states increase in human population as a one reason of decrease in number of birds. This is mainly because, these population need more houses which are built and birds habitats disappear. This statement is challenged by professor. She mentions, not all types of birds decrease by building. Some types of birds increase like bengiuns and other types. Therefore, this reason is not convineince because, some population of bird which are increased can be as a food sources to other types of birds. As a result, this argument is inconvenience.
In addition. the author asserts, increase in agriculcure will destroy birds habitats. these agricultcurs need more land to grow crops. The professor refutes this notion. She says, increase of agrticultcure is done by increase growind of valuable crops without increase in land which is used to grow these crops. So thid statement is not correct.
Finally, the author presents pesticides which are used in agriculture spread in food and water of birds. Birds wil, dye after eat or drinks these contamenated food and drink water or decrease in rate of reproduction will happen. The lecturer has a different point of view. She illustrates to new types of pesticides which do not harm to birds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage and the lecture are ...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in reading passage is inconvenience. To begin with, the author states increas...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'these populations'?
Suggestion: this population; these populations
...umber of birds. This is mainly because, these population need more houses which are built and bi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...n of bird which are increased can be as a food sources to other types of birds. As a r...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...t, this argument is inconvenience. In addition. the author asserts, increase in agricu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...gument is inconvenience. In addition. the author asserts, increase in agriculcure...
^^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...griculcure will destroy birds habitats. these agricultcurs need more land to grow cro...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...turer has a different point of view. She illustrates to new types of pesticides w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83425898605 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.503843801 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359983816289 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102317642749 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121013682397 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256744451469 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277693203927 0.0443174109184 627% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.8541721854 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage and the lecture are ...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in reading passage is inconvenience. To begin with, the author states increas...
^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'these populations'?
Suggestion: this population; these populations
...umber of birds. This is mainly because, these population need more houses which are built and bi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...n of bird which are increased can be as a food sources to other types of birds. As a r...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...t, this argument is inconvenience. In addition. the author asserts, increase in agricu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...gument is inconvenience. In addition. the author asserts, increase in agriculcure...
^^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...griculcure will destroy birds habitats. these agricultcurs need more land to grow cro...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...turer has a different point of view. She illustrates to new types of pesticides w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83425898605 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.503843801 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359983816289 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102317642749 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121013682397 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256744451469 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277693203927 0.0443174109184 627% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.8541721854 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.